Very well drawn, well done!

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thank you. ^^

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I wish I could do wings like that. On to my critique!

Your drawing is beautiful. However, it looks like he is sticking his stomach or pelvic area forward, drawing his back in. Is that what you were going for? Also, his neck being turned that much would probably have a harsher line where the tendon rests.

Other than that, this was overall a very nicely done sketch, and I love it. I hope you continue your work with anatomy, because you are very good.

(Me, I can say what's wrong if I take the time to look, but transfering what I know and what I 'see' in my head doesn't always mesh)

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I get what you mean. I was hoping to have him slouching somewhat, which was why I had the back arched like that. I'll make a darker line for that area next time. I didn't use reference so I find the proportions kind of off myself. Thanks for the C&C. I'm still working on the anatomy...

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Well, if he is going to be slouching, his back would curve slightly out on the lower back area. His neck would also be bending to allow his head to go slightly forward. But like I said, you're better at getting it on paper than I am. So keep it up!

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hey this is good, great figure work.

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^.^ Thank you for saying that.

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Beautiful!
I just love the way its looks
And those wings, they're so gorgeous xD

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Thanks!

(Sorry for the delay.)

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